Larkin explores ideas of inequality between social classes by talking about a clothing store focusing on the way it effects and manipulates the proletariat.The
poem ‘the large cool store’ is about a clothing
store,specifically Marks and Spencers in the 1950s.They sold cheap
clothes which were accessible and affordable for the working class.
Clothing and fashion and are central themes in the poem. Marxists
would view materialism and popular culture as a bad thing as it
benefits the upper class. It does this by distracting the proletariat
from what the really need to be doing: changing the political regime
to a fairer system that benefits all as they believe communism is the
only system that will fully benefit a society and its members. The
title “the large cool store” could be interpreted in two
different ways as it has a dual meaning. Cool could be seen as
popular or in fashion or cold uncomfortable,and harsh. This could
demonstrate what the reality of keeping up with popular culture and
fashion really is,damaging to the proletariat but beneficial to the
bourgeoisie having bad consequences on the lives of the proletariat. Cold could represent the way the bourgeoisie treat the proletariat they heartlessly exploit them to benefit themselves. The cool store is just an institution made to exploit the proletariat further.
The
poems rhyme scheme is ABABA. It is structured to be repetitive like
the jobs of the working class ' factory, yard and site' Many working class people would have
jobs in factories or do manual labour these jobs would have been
boring and consistent and the rhythm of the poem reflects the
structured rhythm of the lives of the working class. They also leave at 'dawn' the proletariat have long working hours and therefore rarely have time to themselves and when they do they go to 'large cool stores' to spend the money they earn to make them feel better about their social class even though they know they cant change it.The poem uses
mono syllabic language making it simple and making the store seem
bland and predictable. When the working class go shopping for new
clothes its usually viewed as a fun experience but this contrasts
with the bland predictable image Larkin creates to show that buying
these clothes isn’t actually a good thing it just reinforces class
inequality by becoming materialistic and creating consumer culture. The proletariat also live in 'low terraced houses' this links to the class of the proletariat they are seen as 'lower' and therefore not good enough to live the high quality of lives the bourgeoisie indulge in.
He
also creates the image we are all copies of each other leading
similar lives ,doing similar work, wearing similar clothes ‘simple
sizes plainly’. These factors are all controlled by the bourgeoisie
and control even the smallest details of the proletariats lives, from
what they eat to what they wear. Simple and plainly could also be how
the bourgeoisie see the proletariat and dumb and easy to manipulate
to meet their own ends. The jobs the proletariat did was repetitive
and didn't require much thought or education and most of the
proletariat didn't pass the 11+ to go to grammar schools or couldn't
afford to designed to make sure they did repetitive and manual labour
in the future while the bourgeois remained the ruling class .
He
also uses colours to create contrast in the first stanza he describes
weekday clothes of ‘Browns and greys, maroons and navy’ but in
the third stanza when describing weekend clothes they are brighter ‘
Lemon, sapphire’. Most people dress differently and brighter at the
weekend as if they are living a double life and that when they have
their weekend outfits they can escape the reality of being working
class. A capitalist society is also illustrated he states the
unskilled work of the proletariat ‘factory, yard and site’ the
working class would work in factories or doing laborious work but
then buy clothes that were mass produced ‘heaps of shirts and
trousers’ therefore increasing the demand for factory and laborious
work creating a cycle in which the bourgeois reap the benefits as
managers, bosses and owners. Andrew motion also recognised this and said about the poem 'drab people during the week trying to change by night into something they are not.'
In
the poem he writes 'to suppose they share that world' and 'how
separate and unearthly love is'. The proletariat would think by
buying these material items they are becoming more like the
bourgeoisie and give them the false belief of social mobility. All
the proletariat are really doing is contributing to the current
capitalist system. As they are just conforming to to capitalist
ideology.
The
poem could be critiqued by feminists for the way in which it
portrays women. Larkin describes women in a derogatory way 'their
sort'. He also suggests a clear divide In the genders 'or women are
or what they do'. He also describes feminine clothing in a sneering
tone 'Nylon baby-dolls and shorties' he uses female sexuality to
create a picture of consumerism and also makes women seem like
objects themselves. 'thin as blouses' also creates the impression
that women are thin and fragile and lack depth. Feminists would
criticise Larkin for this and consider the way he writes about women
to be misogynistic. But the way he describes the women could also be interpreted as sympathetic as the women in the poem are also being manipulated by the bourgeoisie.As they benefit from the women buying the clothing they are going to make them feel they need it and that they are not good enough and need to impress men reinforcing both the hierarchy and the patriarchy.
In
conclusion the poem presents the proletariat as desperate to become
equal to the bourgeoisie they become materialistic to do so. They
believe if they look more like the bourgeoisie they will become more
like them. When actually all that really happens is false
conciousness. All the proletariat are doing when buying these clothes
is contributing to a system of inequality.
Victoria
ReplyDeleteThis is a much better response. Your points are more developed and your use of terminology is also better.
I would like you to explore the interpretations of 'cool' in more depth. You begin to analyse them but move on to quickly.
You must include textual support in p2. Find evidence of their occupation (you include reference in p3), perhaps link to the condition of their houses and again analyse the connotations.
To extend your debate try and include criticism from the ppt (look at what Andrew motion says) as well as exploring Larkin's tone. Is he sympathetic or sneering?